I would like your help please. The following is an excerpt from a fictional story I am writing for a possible book publishing. I would like to get your comments on this short piece please, and if the premise sounds interesting to you.   The story line is one of a serial killer that hunts for and finds his victims on the internet, and the cop that has to track and find him.   Chapter 1   Day 1, 2:30 p.m. The Hunter   As he sat in the chair and st...